Okay so really this is to anyone who's read the first two chapters of blood jewl what i'm wondering is if i should keep writing and put up the next chapter. Or should i hold off...

Right now the main thing is Chapter three is going on well though it's still in the works so what i am wondering is if i should keep posting it up here on da or should i just wait and look around for complite finish it and wait to find a publisher or what not.. one way or another i still need to work on it but of course collage work really did for sure cape in with everything but oh well.. Anyway is wondering about what you think for those who actually read.

Also i know i need to work on writing a bit more so that when i am writing it up it comes up better that way things will work out for the best. At least that is what i am hoping that will turn out alright and work out. but i'm hoping to have some time here shortly least wise for it to be out good least that is what i am hoping wise if it works out... okay i think i am just talking here for no reason or what not..

-sighs-

Anyway i just want to know if anyone really is looking for the next chapter to come out?

though you know i also wonder a bit about what you all think of it.. yes it's still going but maybe what does people think of things that are said? is it going well? Or is it a bit less? Is it keeping your attenting and wanting you to continue reading? Is there any parts you think is borning?

You know things like that I would LOVE!! to hear what you think that might work with improving it! I am just wondering wise about it for that if those are that to ones who want more to hear or what not..

Sure this is just the start of things and probably end up rewriting it all and man wish i had better drawing skills!! then i could really do something alot better with it! Mainly if the comic book part works out better then if i could get the story and the umm what was that called oh yeah Story bored! i soooo NEED to make one... umm yeah maybe it might be good to story bord it out then i have everything! Well really it's just the middle part that is driving me crazy with writing it and all oh well.

Okay also. I wonder.. Who here thinks it's REALLY hard to understand me sometimes? some people say it is so maybe it's true but i guess the main thing is reading it over and over again to get it.. that is if only my spelling doesn't kill me.. and yeah..okay think this is enough for now..

well that's it.. I think maybe who knows right now if it is anything i'll add it or make another thing oh well.. lol
-Kai